Those McNair press releases haunt my dreams now. Thanks for that, Liz! Having no real idea what a press release about a project covering gentrification should look like, I dove in. And failed. Not really 'failed,' but I could have done better. Of course, no draft is ever the final draft, so, after getting verbal feedback from The Boss to direct the flow of the press release, I dove in again.
This time, I emailed one of the scholars being covered and asked for more information regarding their project. I then re-structured each release in a more symbiotic, balanced pattern.
As always, there are most likely edits to be made on the second drafting, but I'll jump into those once I get the drafts back.
For now, I blog and think of the best way to bring a little more creativity and light into my little corner office.
This time, I emailed one of the scholars being covered and asked for more information regarding their project. I then re-structured each release in a more symbiotic, balanced pattern.
As always, there are most likely edits to be made on the second drafting, but I'll jump into those once I get the drafts back.
For now, I blog and think of the best way to bring a little more creativity and light into my little corner office.
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